Amanda’s Poem Journal IV

by yahr12 on 03.09.2012

14 Responses

The sun, moon, and stars
A reminder of what was lost
A beautiful life in the dark
Everything came at too high a cost

I fall into the ocean
As I look at the sky
Watching those glittering stars
Fly on by

I wait as it grows cold
I wait as it grows warm
I wait as the ocean sways back and forth
Beautiful hair, Beautiful eyes
I wait for that Beautiful smile

We all wait for a change to come
Something that gives us reason for hope
Something that gives us reason for hate
So we can move forward with our lives
And live a dream the we knew was meant to be

14 responses

  1. AngelOfMusic

    Wow. Tears up. Beautiful. :)

    • yahr12

      Thanks.Thanks.Thanks, means a lot.

      • AngelOfMusic

        You’re welcome!!! :)

        • Clara.grrr

          THESE AREN’T POEMS YAHR12!! THEY’RE STANZA’S!!! Lol
          I don’t know why I have to keep telling you that. A poem is a collection of stanzas tied together with a rhyme scheme. This is not that!
          These are just a bunch of stanzas! Stop calling them poems! For the love of God, PLEASE!!!
          <3

          • AngelOfMusic

            Whoaa, girl. POEM, POEM, POEM. :)

            • yahr12

              Well clara, I wouldn’t be the person to complain to. I’m only the messenger, Amanda’s the writer. ;D

              • AngelOfMusic

                :O ****gasp. wink, wink, wink****

                • NyteOfKamelot

                  OWwww :D I love it xxx

                  • AngelOfMusic

                    You’re profile picture is awesome looking, NyteOfCamelot! Is that you?

                    • Clara.grrr

                      I hate you so much R.
                      ILLITERATE! You’re stupid!!
                      Lolololololol <3

                      • AИDROMEDA

                        Poems don’t have ro rhyme, Clara.grrr. Calm yo self. Poems can be like one or two words per line, if you wanted. Look up the different types of poetry, you genius.

                        • yahr12

                          HaHa ClareBear you got burned by Mermaid2be. <3

                          • AngelOfMusic

                            Sizzle.

                            • Clara.grrr

                              But you don’t understand, this isn’t a whole poem like it would seem to be. I’ve read ALL of R’s poems, on her laptop, after we got home from school.
                              These are just a bunch of stanzas that she put in one entry.
                              Although, I agree Mermaid2be, this isn’t a poem it’s just some stanzas from the alleged ‘Amanda’

                              Peace out
                              <3

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