Did you ever love?

by Everlasting on 10.06.2011

7 Responses

I was silently sitting in the sand,
Listening to the sea…

Knowing the wonders are fading,
They are just lies…

Why did I believe?
Why did you leave,
When you heard my desperate cries…

I was rapt in the beautiful wonders,
That came out in words…

Hearing the dreams that were real,
Or so I thought.

I was a fool,
And you were so cruel.
It’s the battle that my hear fought.

So hear your lies,
And see glistening tears…
Set yourself free,
As I’m trapped in fears…
Why did you have to leave without me?
Did you ever doubt me?
Did you ever love?

I am living my life as normally,
As I can.

But I am clueless while knowing,
You’re not around.

I wasn’t set free,
Trapped by me,
When I thought I love what I’d found.

So hear your lies,
And see glistening tears…
Set yourself free,
As I’m trapped in fears…
Why did you ever leave without me?
Did you ever doubt me?
Did you ever love?

Why did you ever leave without me?
Did you ever doubt me?
Did you ever love?

7 responses

  1. Mary-Dee

    Awww, wow, this is amazing, SilentS….

    • frozenfire

      every line is soo tweetable!!! i love it!!!!!! btw do u use twitter>???

      • Missparkles

        This is absolutely beautiful, amazing, wonderful… I’m in awe…

        • Everlasting

          aww thanx!!! <3 F-F WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!? You alway disappear!

          P.S. this was inspired by Kt tunstall’s song called Throw me a rope <3

          • frozenfire

            i m sorry..i know i tend to disappear often..but i have hell lot of studying to do..Physics…Chemistry..Economics..MAths……Stats….English Literature….And my personal life..keeps me damn busy u kno!!!!! but i come time to time..just to see..how much i m compelled to sacrifice!!!

            • Everlasting

              aww thanx F-F!!! <3 we missed ya!!!

              • Everlasting

                215: I LOVE THIS ONE! but I swear I wrote this ages ago!

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