DoesThisMakeSense?!

by Julie_A on 02.07.2010

BIRTHDAY!!

so its ur birthday
and I have lots of things to say
but first lets celebrate in many ways
even if its still may

lets have fun
even if we have to run
with our teacher thats a nun
in the sun

I hope each of our gift
will give ur spirit a lift
even if we jump off a cliff

but I know this day will be perfect
with no disrespect
because we’ll protect

I hope this day will be filled with happiness
and that u’ll feel like a princess[i wrote it 4 myBF]
with some joyfulness
and maybe even some sadness

so as we all say,
“happy happy birthday!!!”

-Julie_A

AmeKumo 02.08.2010

So cool! Thats nice of you to write your BFF such a nice peom for her birthday!
Julie_A 02.08.2010

thanks… AmeKumo… you always have something positive to say…
jessicahuey 04.11.2010

ur not trying to hard. i like that. aww thats so nice of u. i wish the ‘‘Birthday song’’ was like this. so personall and bubbly! it makes sense!

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