I’m feeling it hard to describe my feelings in words…..cause there are no words equivalent to my feelings…they are soo new..so strange that if i use a replacement, it seems unfair to my unexplainable feeling!!!!! Anyways who should i try to put my one in a trillion feeling into a bunch of repeated words?? my feeling is unique….it is not just love…not just hate…not an obsession…not enthusiam…..so what is it? should i have my own word for my feeling?? But the thing is i want to deliver my feeling to the outside world…i want to have a visible word for my feeling!!!! But is it possible….Now i m hunting for a word that exactly matches my emotion…my feeling…… There is some kinda strange splash..thug..thug…beat..beat….woosh…going on in my body….but alas! i can never explain to the outside world how exactly it feels……blah…blah…it turned out lame …sorry….duunnoo what to write now!!!!!!!!!!!1
Feelings..!
by 
frozenfire
on 12.18.2010
3 responses
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Really well written, nice choice of words, and it has a good flow:) wow i sounded like my english teacher rite now lol.
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spur of the moment writing??
dont worry, I get that feeling too.
im not sure if it matches yours, but, i do have those moments where i feel so excruciatingly happy, i feel like my whole body is going to rip itself apart and reveal something so beautifully blinding, something that would be the very definition of how im feeling right at that very second.same goes for when im feeling a mixture of sadness, confusion, anger, and hurt. i feel like i’ll just explode into this dark, ugly, foreboding THING, that’ll hurt anything and anyone i love or dont love, or anything in between.
IT SO DID NOT COME OUT LAME!!!!!
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oh thanks……well…ya u r rite..though it needs a lil bit of editing it dint come one that lame!
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