I Am From poem   !! READ!!!this IM BEGGING!!!

by pinky7amc7 on 02.08.2010

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I am from the fire place warm and bright
from the radio and the perfume smells
i am from the cozy doll house three stories in the sky
i am from pink roses the swaying purple willow trees, whose blossoms fall steadily with care,as if to say winter is near

im from christmas trees and banquets galore
from mom and the pastry chief
im from eating and late arrivals and from imaginative thinkers,well rounded with spite

im from the never say you cannt say you cans and the movie star dreamers and the tryers and doers
im from Easter Sunday
im from southern accents and four leaf clovers
magic bars and candy yams
from the crazy misunderstanding with guns in their hands

im related to pictures of the past on the walls,filled with dust from the time that has pasted ,the traces of my past, allow me to look back at the dirt hidden treasures of my long forgotten past!

THIS WAS A HOMEWORK ASSINMENT WE HAD 2 WRITE A POEM ABOUT R SELFS AND FAMILY!!TELL ME WAT U THINK??

9 responses

  1. angelNdevil

    great story u should keep writing

    • SpaceCowboy

      OMG! my friend had to do this same assignment around the same time as u! that is crazy! lol not really. hahaha :) it was really good! man i whish i had mad poetry skills like u. :)

      • Jacqattack

        OMG! That was soo awesome. : ] I am poems are the best to write. hope you make more in the future……… – Jacqattack <3

        • TeenQueen96

          Cool. This poem was FULL of awesomenosity.

          • artemis

            I like it. Awesome. Very awesome.

            • BlueRoseGrey

              amazing i loved it!

              • 6twigirl6

                wow that is amazing :-O <<<< my face after i read it

                • baconsoap64

                  did you, by any chance, have a language art teacher named Mrs. Heinrich, or went to Holmes middle school?  If so… UP TOP! ME TOO! (not trying you to post personal info, i just wanna know if i got some peeps that know amanda)

                  • Bambi

                    Cool, what does it mean?

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