I’ll just go

by summercrazy on 11.28.2011

6 Responses

My black, soft-as-silk midnight sky
And the giant orb of embers floating impossibly high

A villainous man confessing the truth
And the thought of children enjoying their youth

My crazy fantasies about all there may be
The truth of the universe destroying all philosophy

Long, hot summer days spent by the pool
And the glistening winters spent immersed in the cool

Crisp autumn leaves and those jewels above
A crazy punk rockers’ campaigns for love

The far-fetched tales of the man in the moon
I may be young but it’s never too soon

This road has been long and often rough
I’m the same,though I’ve had enough

So when the angels call my name
I shall make no fuss and quietly go

Remember, though,
There shall always be tomorrow

6 responses

  1. Cutedramatic

    Oh, that was beautiful! So meaningful…(single tear drops) (claps hands)

    • ElizabethMop

      (claps hand with Cutedramatic) That was… Amazing… Like a rainbow, but only more beautiful

      • Missparkles

        ……speechless That was too amazing for words to properly describe.

        • poemgirl98

          Amazing summercrazy

          • summercrazy

            Awww, thanks guys xD

            • Blushie7

              Wow breathtaking seriously you are so talented my poetry is smelly rubbish dipped in more smelly rubish compared to this…….wow! :D

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