Love and Troubles: Chapter 9

by KylarMorgan on 11.18.2011

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Chapter 9

“Hey babe.” Luke said as I climbed into the passenger seat of his truck on Monday morning. 

“Hey.” I said buckling my seatbelt. Luke hadn’t called or texted all weekend but that morning he called and asked if I wanted a ride to school. It was better than riding my bike so I agreed even if I was mad at him. 

I pulled out my seatbelt quickly but couldn’t manage to get it in. I fumbled around with it, trying to get the stupid thing to latch on. 

“Baylin.” Luke said. I looked up at him. “What’s the matter?” he asked me. 

“Oh, nothing. Nothing is the matter.” I said sarcastically. “I mean, when your boyfriend doesn’t call you the weekend after you two make out it’s completely fine. I mean, nice guys do it all the time, right?” I looked at him. 

Luke shook his head. “Baylin, I’m so sorry about that. I wanted to call or even just text but I couldn’t.”

“And why is that?” I asked. 

“Because I was working.” 

“Oh, since when did you have a job?” I was getting madder. 

“Since I moved here.” 

“And what is your job?” I asked him. 

He hesitated. “I can’t tell you.” 

I practically blew up. “You can’t tell me? You can’t tell your own girlfriend what your job is? Then who can you tell?” 

“Baylin, I’m sorry. I really can’t tell you. I wish I could but I can’t.” Luke sounded helpless. 

“What is that supposed to mean? You want to tell me but you can’t? Luke, if you and I are dating, I have one request: to be completely honest with me. I’m not going to make you hang out with me all the time or make you remember my birthday or have you buy me flowers on Valentine’s Day. I just want honesty.” 

I looked him deep in the eye. “Luke, what were you really doing last night?” 

He sighed. “I was following my boss’s orders. I was working.” 

I practically punched him. “Great! All I ask for is honesty and you go and lie to me again! You are unbelievable, Luke Zenith—if that even is your name.” 

“Baylin…” 

“Just drive.” I crossed my arms over my chest. “We’re gonna be late.” I looked out the window the whole ride to school.

  • * * * *

“Hi Baylin.” I looked up to see Bridget staring down at me. 

“Hey.” I said. I was sitting on the bleachers by the basketball court, watching Luke play with his buddies. He was practicing for the try-outs this Friday. I would have gone home on my own but I didn’t have a bike or a car so my only choice was to wait. 

Bridget came and sat beside me. We just watched Luke and his friends play for a while. 

“Baylin, what happened?” she asked, looking at Luke. She could probably feel the tension between us and the hostility I had shown towards him earlier.  

“Luke and I just had a little argument is all.” I said simply. 

“What about?” she asked, scooting closer to me. 

“Just, you know, couple-stuff I guess.” 

“Oh.” Bridget said. “Is that all?” 

I sighed. “Yeah, that’s just ‘bout it.” 

“Okay, if you say so. Just know that I’m always available to talk.” she looked at me. 

“Are you sure? You’re so busy. And your schedule is almost always filled with cheer practice.” I responded. 

“No it’s not!” she exclaimed. 

“Well, they’re calling you back now.” I pointed to the girls that were calling Bridget down. “Case closed. And plus, you’re popular. You have more friends which means more plans which means less time for people like me.” I rambled. 

“But—” I cut her off by gently pushing her down the bleachers. 

“Go.” I said. She hesitated but eventually started walking down the bleachers, one step at a time. I turned my attention back to the basketball game just in time to see Luke score the “winning basket.” Trenton cheered. 

“That was luck, man.” Dan huffed. He was bent over with his hands on his knees, trying to breathe in every ounce of air he could manage. Juvien just laughed. 

“Dan, he won because he’s good. You and I both know that.” Juvien turned to Luke. “Good game, bro.” he shook Luke’s hand. 

“Thanks.” Luke grinned. He turned to me and looked in my eyes. It was a silent apology. 

I tried to ignore it and continue to be mad, but when he looked at me like that I couldn’t hold a grudge against him. I hid my feelings and kept a solemn face as I slowly stepped down from the bleachers. 

I stared Luke in the eye as I kept walking up to him until I could feel the heat rolling off of his body. His face mirrored mine. I looked deep into his eyes to see if he really was sorry. He was. I could just see the sincerity in them. I finally smiled and hugged his sweaty body. 

Luke hugged me back and I could just imagine that dazzling smile that must have been lighting up his face. He bent down and kissed me and his friends, Dan, Trenton, and Juvien, clapped and cheered. 

“Dude, Luke, get a room!” Dan shouted. 

Luke smiled and gave me a peck one more time before he turned to face Dan. “I’ll get a room as soon as you and Violet stop making out behind the bleachers.” 

Dan’s jaw unhinged from his face as red quickly crept up his neck to his cheeks. Juvien and Trenton laughed at him as Luke kissed me and spun me around. I laughed hysterically as he placed me at the base of the bleachers. 

“I love you, Baylin. I’m sorry I didn’t call during the weekend but I really, honestly had to work. I can’t tell you what it is. but if I could, I would.” 

“Luke, the whole “having to work thing” sounds pretty fake but I’ll give you the benefit of the doubt. I’ll believe you until you are proven guilty.” I flashed him a coy smile. 

“Deal. I promise I wasn’t cheating on you. I love you too much. And after Friday—” he paused. “—I wouldn’t do that. I’m dedicated to you and only you. My heart continues to beat for you and you only because you are the one I truly love.” Luke had just melted my previously ice-cold heart. I had never believed that love like this existed but as I felt the rush of affection for Luke wash over me, I knew that he was the one for me. And I knew that I would do anything and give anything for him.

17 responses

  1. darkangelxoxo

    can’t wait for more;))

    • Missparkles

      ……I am absolutely and totally in love with this story. KYLAR YOU’RE SO AMAZING! And this is gorgeous writing…. even if it is romance ;D.

      • KylarMorgan

        -darkangelxoxo: Maybe I can write more on the drive to my trip. I can probably post it when I get back. :)
        -MissP: Aww! Luke melted Baylin’s heart and you melted mine! :) Thank you. I’m trying to find a good spot for more stuff but for now they’re in the “honeymoon stage” of their relationship. :P Like I said to darkangelxoxo, I’ll try to write more on the drive. Wish me luck! And I wish you luck with writing your Superior! I expect about two chapters when I get back! ;D

        • Cutedramatic

          how are you getting that different font for the title of your story? IT’S like it’s different and in orange, and then chapter 9 is in the stantard TAP font and color..


          GREAT CHAPTER!

          • KylarMorgan

            -CuteD: You use these:|. And thank you!
            -ALL: What do you think about Luke? What do you think about Laylin? Do you think it’ll work? What do you think about Luke’s weird behavior?

            • Zylaar

              Yeughhh… Puuke.. xP So gushy…….
              But brill, Kylar ;D

              • brittobart

                go die in a hole **tch.

                • brittobart

                  kylar, Its a free country. If anyone else had the same zine post as me you would not say anything. So stop being an ugly hypocritical divnep.

                  • Zylaar

                    what’s up with that, britt???

                    • Mary-Dee

                      I’m sorry, but what was that for, Brittobart?

                      But…. eeeeeeek kissing… hides in corner and covers eyes. As always, though, awesome writing!

                      BTW, I prob’ly won’t be commenting on every chapter (‘cause my ‘net always screws up and messes up comments, plus I dun wanna email-spam everyone), but just so you know, I AM reading everything. (…every single Zine I’ve missed. dies.)

                      • KylarMorgan

                        -Mary-Dee: Ahaha!  Yes, mush-gush.  I’m sorry.  And it’s totally fine if you don’t comment on every single one since that’s a lot to ask, but I suppose your computer won’t screw up one here and there, would it??? Jk, jk.  I’m just glad you’re reading my slightly lame (very lame) story.  It means a lot.  Good luck with catching up on all of them.  That’s a lot of reading you have to do! :O

                        • Mary-Dee

                          Kfffft xDD. IT IS NOT LAME. REALLY.

                          And… 31 pages. 310 Zines.

                          ….this will take a while xD.

                          • KylarMorgan

                            Wow, you’re reading every single post or just the ones you follow? Thanks for the reassuring although I still find the plot lame. Good luck (again) with the catching up!

                            • Mary-Dee

                              Every single one… xD. There’s so much amazing writing on the Zine; I’d be missing so much if I only looked at the stories I follow :P.

                              • KylarMorgan

                                :O Wow, that’s a lot of catching up then! You’re so great to do that! I’d feel so overwhelmed that I couldn’t do it. I’d just read the ones that caught my eye. :P

                                • Mary-Dee

                                  But then I’d feel like I’ve missed so much! And then I’d run around in circles on the site trying to find the ones I didn’t read and read them anyways! Because I’m just weird like that! xD.

                                  —there goes my trying-not-to-email-spam-everyone xD. shot.

                                  • Everlasting

                                    I swear there is domething upbwith him what the he’ll is hid job!? HmmmmmHe’s cheating on her and she’s gonna get preggers

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