Mind War~Prologue

by Missparkles on 05.10.2012

12 Responses

Soo, this is a story I started looooong before Superior. But it’s been so long, I’m just re-posting it.

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My name is Rylee Stark. I’m a Special Operations Agent, First Class. Look, I don’t have a lot of time right now, but I’ll explain what I can. This is some seriously dangerous sh*t I’m about to share here, but you deserve to know.

Let me start with the basics.

The year is ’06; 2100, that is. 2106. We’ve come a long way, humans. We’ve found cures for most diseases (except the common cold), made our way past Pluto, advanced in technology. The men and women of the last centuries would call it “remarkable.”

I wouldn’t.

Because of advancements in technology, things have been invented that never should have been touched. I’ve seen the books from the twentieth and twenty-first centuries; all those authors thought that time travel would be our downfall.

If only they knew how wrong they were.

Time travel is still but a myth. After scientists tried and failed time and time again, they put the idea on a shelf and never looked back. No, time travelling crazies aren’t our problem. Something else has been created in the past several years; a power that many used to think belonged to creatures in fairytales.

I’m talking mind control.

But honey, this isn’t your average kind of mind control. This is something else entirely. I don’t know what you’re expecting; maybe some freaky psychic with crazy hair commanding an army of brainwashed losers who are too weak to defend themselves.

Ha. I wish.

The reality is, that’s not even close. What we’re dealing with here is top-notch technology. Like I said, my time is limited, so I can’t get into specifics. Let me just say this: if the process works—and 99.9% of the time it does—the victim will go completely insane.

Scary, right? Well, that’s not the half of it.

See, when the CUTAS (Countries United Toward the Advancement of Science) discovered this terrible technology, they weren’t planning on letting it out. Except that they did. It wasn’t a public release, of course. That would be completely idiotic.

Someone leaked it from the inside.

Now, a secret group has the information. They’re strong, apparently; the governments of the world are scared AF. This group—the Unthinkables, they call themselves—have been sending direct threats. It takes a hell of a lot of confidence to do that.

And me, I’m a Special Operations Agent. What that means is that I, along with all the other SOAs, have an extremely important task. Our job? Find the traitor, the one who leaked the info. Locate the HQ of the enemy, infiltrate it, and kill as many of them as we can. We don’t have long to do this: two weeks, to be exact. Fourteen days. That’s how long the enemies gave us. That’s when they said they will attack.

That’s when the mind war will begin.

12 responses

  1. AngelOfMusic

    THIS IS EPIC. I love this, and it’s sooo original! :O I love that name, and the last sentence.

    That’s when the mind war will begin.

    • Missparkles

      AHHHH. THANK YOUUUU :D. I’m glad you like it :’).

      • AngelOfMusic

        Ahhh you’re welcome! :) I really love it, and I adore Rylee.

        • crayolaface

          Oh my god.
          This is so amazing
          and original
          I just asdfghjkl
          I can’t
          falls out of bed
          Let me kiss you feet to thank you for giving me the honour of reading such epicosity.

          • AngelOfMusic

            Hahahaha. :) :)

            • KylarMorgan

              I’m so glad you’re starting again! :D I’ve missed Ry-Ry so much even if you sent me a chapter not long ago. :P Keep me updated! I’m excited to see the changes you’ve made.

              • Missparkles

                @Crayola: Oh my god. Thank you so much asdfghjkl you’re awesome :D. …you might not wanna kiss my feet…they’ve been danced on xD. Epicosity… I like it ;).

                @Kylar: Haha, will do :). The changes aren’t anything big, though.

                • Missparkles

                  Just posted the first chapter~! :)

                  • AngelOfMusic

                    YES! I’m checking it out right now.

                    • Zylaar

                      Wait. so is this a rewrite? Are you drastically changing it or issit just a few little tweaks here n ther?? But it’s good to see Mind War back up! xDD

                      • Missparkles

                        Nah, I actually didn’t change much. Just some minor stuff, mostly with grammar xD.

                        • Zylaar

                          ahh kool. ritee… xD

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