by 
artemis
on 01.23.2010
I do realize.
you cry every night.
i also cried.
Its like i died.
Its the feeling that i feel
I dont know whats the deal.
It doest feel real.
Real. No artificial no fake.
This thing is true heartache.
Its giving me so much pain.
So much pain I cannot sustain.
Its like im going insane.
Pain.
Pain is like a bit of death.
Like losing your own breath.
Its becoming hard to breathe.
Losing the ease to see.
See.
See that you cannot be.
To be who you want to be.
Becoming free….
this is so beautiful, wow!
Awsome. :)
thanks! i just write poems when i’m bored and the words just flow…
:)
I compliment you enough at school…
it just goes without sayin’ your soo cool
and don’t even try to be modest
coz you darn well know your the best
so at least for me believe in yourself
and I myself
can’t do this poem thing
as good as you its amazing
so blossom
coz your so awesome
I do realize. that everyone you know, someday will die. Instead of saying all of your goodbyes, let them know you realize that life goes fast. It’s hard to make the good things last. You realize they all go down but it’s just an illusion of the world spinning round. All good things come to an end.
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