That twinkle!

by frozenfire on 10.14.2011

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Her facade – dark smile!

How deceiving-how bright!

But only she knows what is beneath!

Prisoned in this dark corner-

She pretneds she is free!

Relying on her disguise,

how far can she take it?

no matter how bright the sun is

for her, its stil a dark tunnel!

Looking for a way out!

In this maze of no visible exit

she lives, she survives, she suffocates

But that twinkle in the horizon

just wont let her give up!

No exit? Nevermind!

this light-it does blind her

no shades to hide her eyes

Everywhere-the dark rules

but that twinkle!!!!

3 responses

  1. Mary-Dee

    Oooo, this sounds so awshum and dark! :DDDD.

    • Missparkles

      How mysterious :D. I love it x).

      • frozenfire

        Thanks!!!!! i know m late!

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