That was the day.

by AmberDavis on 02.25.2011

34 Responses

I met Amanda during one fateful day.

I woke up, dazed, on top of Crab Apple Hill.
The sun was just rising up the faraway mountains. And some early birds perched atop the trees, preening themselves.

Amanda was sitting beside me. She asked me for my name. I shook my head, I couldn’t remember.

Smiling, she lifted her head up to the sky and breathed deeply.
“You know, I really love the sunrise. Even sunsets.”

The subject was weird, but I was compelled to say something.
“Why is that?” My head throbbed and I lifted my hand to massage my temples.

“They mark the end of a day, and the beginning of a new one.”

I nodded, although I couldn’t fully understand what in the world that had to do with me. I couldn’t even remember why I was here.

“You shouldn’t worry about your memories.” She smiled again and looked at me. “I’m Amanda, Amanda Valentino.”

“That’s a pretty name.” I answered, because I wasn’t sure if this was my cue to shake her hand or introduce myself too. I mean who am I kidding, I didn’t even know my own name.

She cocked her head to the side and winked at me. “How about Amber?”

“Pardon me?”

“Amber. Would you like that name?”

“Amber…” I said, turning the name over my tongue, registering it in my head. But this was crazy. Why was she giving me a new name?

I wanted my old one back. And my head aches.

Amanda ignored the puzzled look on my face.
“That’s one color that both the sunrise and the sunset has. Amber stones were also said to help people accept changes. Make right decisions. It helps heal the body, mind, and soul…” Here she looked at me intently, “And it also helps them to think clear thoughts.”

My head was fuzzed in alright, but Amanda’s voice rode the wind like a thousand chimes. I felt relaxed, and my eyes traveled to her fingers, which was carefully twirling around a yellowish vintage pendant. She noticed my diverted attention, and she giggled. “I love this necklace too, besides the surise and sunset.”

“Because its an amber stone?”

She shook her head and stared at the cold stone. “No. Because this is me.”

I think I heard her wrong that time. I did forget my name, but I still knew my grammar. “You mean because its yours, right?”

Here she laughed heartily, throwing her head back as if it was a joke only she could understand. “Silly Amber…” She tucked a strand of my hair that was loosely flapping on my face. Then she took back her hand and stared at me intently “Because this,” she held the pendant up for me to see, “This represents who I am.”

The stone caught the sunlight, sending little sparkles of rainbows dancing around on our feet.

She stood up and brushed the grass clinging on her cream bohemian skirt. “You’ll love that name, I’m sure.”

And I just sat there, as if I was glued to the spot where I was sitting.

“I’ll see you soon Amber, it was lovely meeting you.”

She smiled her sweet smile and made her way down the hill, her auburn hair flying about her.

“Help people think clear thoughts, Amber, clear thoughts… clear thoughts!”

It was as if she was shouting, but the wind was carrying her voice like a whisper, floating all around me.

I tried to follow her with my eyes, but as soon as she disappeared from my sight, my head pounded again.

Thud, thud, thud.

Like a hammer pounding the head of a nail.

Thud, thud, thud.

Then my vision blurred.

Then I fell back on the grass.

Until blackness surrounded me. Until there was no more sound of birds chirping, or the wind howling.

Until the only sound left was Amanda’s voice.

Until I could only hear my slow uneven breath.

Until I could only hear my heartbeat.

Until I was no more.

34 responses

  1. NyteOfKamelot

    This is so beautiful!
    :DDDDD
    I really love this!

    • Blushie7

      WOW stunningly beautiful amaber this is lovely im glad you shared it with us thanx :D
      i LOVE it too

      • EllaMarie

        Very beautiful, Amber! :)

        • AmberDavis

          Aww, thanks guys. I really appreciate it big time! Group hug!

          • Blushie7

            awww ur welocme u deserve the compliments GROUP HUG!!! :D
            lol <3

            • AmberDavis

              Yey! :D

              • Everlasting

                wow this is AMAZING i love love love it i wish there was more but amber died i think :(… i hope not but she probably did but write more anyway! lolz :3

                • AmberDavis

                  Nope, I lived to tell the tale Silent-Seas. :D

                  Just blacked out. I write some more next time. :)

                  • socrazy

                    hey i love ur little article thing u can really put i in perspective girl!!!!!!!!!!

                    • AmberDavis

                      oh, thanks socrazy! I really appreciate that! Hugs! :)

                      • Cutedramatic

                        whats ur real name! i gotta no! finsh the story

                        • AmberDavis

                          Cutedramatic dear! Still can’t remember.

                          But I will finish the story of my Amanda run-in’s, as soon as I can. :P

                          • EllaMarie

                            What if you wake up with amnesia in the very, near future? Then you wouldn’t be able to log in to TAP! Much less post the story of Amber Davis.

                            love you all,
                            Ally

                            • AmberDavis

                              What do you mean Ally? Like another amnesia on top of the one I had before?

                              Give me a buzz,
                              AmberDavis

                              • EllaMarie

                                @Amber, I mean like, you getting amnesia in the real world. Is that more clear to you, now?

                                • DoodleMaster

                                  I like it - Amnesia is one thing I hope I never get…

                                  • AmberDavis

                                    yep, I get it now Ally. haha, well because of that I’m now attaching a post-it to my closet which has my username and password to TAP – in case of emergencies! LOL

                                    • AmberDavis

                                      Oh thanks much DoodleMaster! Yeah it actually sucks for me(my character) because I live with my parents, but there are loads of stuff I don’t remember about them.

                                      Like what my grandpa’s name was. And what happened before my accident.

                                      But I can’t complain much…

                                      Can I?
                                      AmberDavis

                                      • DoodleMaster

                                        You remind me of a character in a book I read, “The Memoirs of a Teenage Amnesiac.” Don’t worry, it’s not a bad thing! I just seem to compare people I met to characters in books :)

                                        • Everlasting

                                          YAY JUST A BLACK OUT!

                                          • AmberDavis

                                            DoodleMaster, that’s cool. And because of that, I borrowed the book you said from our library! :D

                                            will read it soon,
                                            AmberDavis

                                            • AmberDavis

                                              Silent-Seas, yeah, I do hope it all comes back soon. It gets frustrating at times.

                                              Nevertheless, I’m still here,
                                              AmberDavis

                                              • EllaMarie

                                                @Amber, But what if your mom (or dad) throws the post-it out accidentally? And then a second later, your in the hospital…being treated for a head wound. (And you can’t remember anything of course.)

                                                • Cutedramatic

                                                  CousinAmbs, ur 20?! im sooo confused! im probably younger than every1

                                                  • AmberDavis

                                                    @Ally, that would be definitely hard! Haha, well what do you think I should do?? It’s quite scary.

                                                    @BabyPauly, yes I am! shocking? haha. :P

                                                    • frozenfire

                                                      a different concept,……amber!!! like it!

                                                      • AmberDavis

                                                        Aww, thank you frozenfire! Super appreciate that! Fist-bumps!

                                                        Love,
                                                        AmberDavis

                                                        • frozenfire

                                                          Amber….are you really 20???

                                                          • AmberDavis

                                                            yes. :)

                                                            • EllaMarie

                                                              @Amber- I don’t know. What DO you want to do? And I’m going to turn 20 in December. ☺

                                                              Ally

                                                              • NyteOfKamelot

                                                                R-R-Really? Wow! I had no idea…

                                                                • AmberDavis

                                                                  Ally, high fives! My birthday is on December 31, what’s yours?? (and its creepy to think if I actually have amnesia in real life! I don’t know what I would do!)

                                                                  Jayd, yep, why? Kinda surprised? :P

                                                                  • EllaMarie

                                                                    Amber, my birthday is on December 29.

                                                                    • AmberDavis

                                                                      Wow, 2 days before mine. :)

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