“Alright Molly i think that you dreamed it!” Sandy looked back at me like I had gone crazy.“Sandy I swear he was at my house when my mom and dad were out.“I said franticlly“He looked like an angel.“I knew I wasn’t lying about this one.“Are you sure you didn’t dream him up?“I tired to explain what he looked like to her,but she just stood there looking at me like i was crazy.“Molly your 16 us girls dream about the perfect…“She stopped in mid sentence and looked straight past me like she had just won a million dollars.I turned around and saw my angel luke walking toward us.“You were right you didn’t dream him“she whispered.“Hi,I’m the random guy that was at your house the other night I’m not sure if you…” “Ya I remember you.Your the creepy guy that showed up at my doorstep.”
The unexpected Part 2
by 
Mrs.cullen
on 12.31.2010
4 responses
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Ahhh Molly dont say that! u shouldve said yea ur the guy that…. well something else not “creepy” ! Good story tho! :)
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I know this is kind of a late responce…but I just read both parts today, and I think you should continue
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Thanks and i will!
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hi i’m new and just read your story (bit of a late response sorry about that) but i really like your story :)
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