“What’s going on?” he woundered,“What’s happening to me?” Then he closed his eyes as if trying to remember somthing he forgot. When he opend his eyes he had a strange fealing. Almost as if his feet weren’t touching the ground. He looked around and realized that he wasn’t anywhere near the ground. He started to feal strange. Nothing looked or felt the same anymore. He closed his eyes again,trying to figure out what was hapening. When he opened his eyes the secound time he was standing outside the school. He saw Alex walk by and look at someone who had just asked anouther girl out. Then Alan started feeling sad. That guy was him. Alan wished he could tell Alex he was sorry, but he couldn’t talk to her without making her mad. His ticket to the best life ever turned out to be a ticket to nowhere…
Ticket to nowhere(2)
by 
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on 03.21.2010
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