Your Life

by unknowngirl12 on 02.20.2011

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Your breath is special
Your heart is always beating
Until both are gone

That is my haiku I wrote in Grade 7 and got 10/10 on it. My teacher was a real softy and romantic since she’s a girl. She told me she almost cried when she read it. So I decided to share it with you all.

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  1. NyteOfKamelot

    Such beautiful words!

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